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Alright so my firend ~Vaowie (https://www.deviantart.com/vaowie) needs some help editing and making a book she wrote with her friend better. Do you think you guys could help them out a little, its arlight to say no its not like i'm going to HUNT YOU DOWN AND CUT YOU LIKE A FISH! Lol, I love the Grinch. I'm going to put up on of their chapters up and I'd love to know what you guys think

Sid: I go into FH's room to wake up my roomie and yell out happy easter right? Sid comes into my room while I'm half awake since she and her crew were a little loud this morning *whispers* I had a water balloon. Sid: So as soon as I turn on the lights and yell out HAPPY EASTER! As soon as she almost finishes saying easter I threw the water balloon (mission complete!) I hit her right in the stomach with my water balloon! Sid: I nod to her my clothes all wet my best clothes too I might add lass! I smile at her get up and give her a huge hug saying Happy Easter Sid: And before she pulls away and head off to her desk to start a long day in

Sid: you want to know what FH and I do? when we are bored? we start to talk about the most randomest things like we talk about super duper serious stuff then stare right at each other very seriously. Sid: then as soon as I say, 'Well what are we going to do about that Las?' I brust into laughter! Sid: With me laughing not too long after her. And when we are done laughing about serious stuff. Sid: I suddenly stop laughing and say 'No really, what are you going to do about that?' I sit there staring at her strait in the eyes seeing that she's wanting to laugh so badly! I can't take it any longer and fall of my chair laughing all over aga